Train Poem

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28 Jul 2021, 01:11 #111503
A poem about trains.
By Mr. Save.


*ahum*






TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN!!
TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN!!
TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN!!






(oo)-(oo_oo)-(oo_oo)-(oo_oo)-TRAAIIIIIIIN!!\\








TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN

TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN JOGGER TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN
TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRACKS ARE COMING APART TRAIN TRAIN


TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN CAN'T SLOW DOWN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN
TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN CROSSING TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN CAR IN CROSSING TRAIN TRAIN
TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN CAR GO BYE BYE TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN







TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN
ANOTHER TRAIN ANOTHER TRAIN ANOTHER TRAIN

(math math math math) OH NO


TRAIN _________________________________TRAIN


--------TRAIN_______________________TRAIN---------


----------------TRAIN____________TRAIN------------------


------------------------TRAIN__TRAIN--------------------------





~~BOOOOOM~~
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28 Jul 2021, 01:12 #111504
It's a work in progress. What do you think? :blush:
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28 Jul 2021, 01:49 #111506
why did the train collide with another train

it would take a serious error for that to occur
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28 Jul 2021, 01:57 #111508
I live next to the train tracks this encapsulates the spirit
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28 Jul 2021, 02:13 #111509
monday wrote:
28 Jul 2021, 01:49
why did the train collide with another train

it would take a serious error for that to occur
Mr. Save wrote:
28 Jul 2021, 01:11

TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN CAN'T SLOW DOWN TRAIN TRAIN TRAIN
The brakes were out. Maybe I should reword it to make this fact clearer?
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28 Jul 2021, 04:28 #111519
Mr. Save: poet laureate
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28 Jul 2021, 04:51 #111520
This is beautiful. And it wouldn't be possible in a non-online format. I'm going to use this as evidence that posts should be added to the library of Congress.
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28 Jul 2021, 17:27 #111526
I think that I shall never see / A poem lovely as a train
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