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25 Feb 2021, 11:55 #93087
rhythm in your step (folksy, think loch lomond or the holly and the ivy or similar)

in the forest all the birds are singing
past the river and on the hills
as they dance among the trees i hear their lovesongs on the breeze
wont you go and see them while you will

in the valley all the lads and lasses
are dancing gayly in the village square
wont you go and take your pick, why not talk and dance a bit,
im sure theyd love to have you there

just put some rhythm in your step
put a flower in your step
put some springtime in your step and go walking...
but please oh someday come back to me


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25 Feb 2021, 12:06 #93088
if people like this i might be persuaded to share some of my other, older songs and poetry :bigblush:
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01 Mar 2021, 19:12 #93817
wait you wrote this? it's very nice!
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